Itz true story
In grave yard lying
down on my knees before the grave stone of a girl whom I adored. Tears were
rolling out in silence. I kept flowers on her grave stone. My heart was very
heavy with sorrow, and pain, with vain in my heart.
I spoke to the grave
stone as if I am speaking to her “I miss you very much dear. Why did you leave
me alone in this world of heartless people? Why didn’t you take me also to the
heavens? Without you I’m like ancient mariner.”
“My dear child!” a soft
voice interrupted me. I turned back, wiping my tears. I saw a white bearded
tall man with a gentle look standing there in his black suit spoke, “Don’t stop
let them flow.”
Listening him, I burst
out drenching my shirt. I couldn’t stop; it took some time to for me to become
normal.
“Who is she?”
“Her name is Kate
William and she is and will be my loved forever.”
With abrupt and elate
expression on his face he, “What? What did you say right now? Is she your
love?”Then his face colour changed into elegiac, “I’m sorry for that. What happened to her? How did she get expired? I
didn’t respond.
He repeated, “How did
you meet her? Where did you both meet for the first time? I am very keen to
listen to love stories. Can you please say yours?” I felt that it was very
abhorrent because I’m despondent one-side and he wants me to narrate my love
story. Uff! What a crazy man! Seems like a crazy monkey. First I got
acrimonious, but I said, “Okay! I will say you but before it can we sit there.”
“Okay! As you wish and
thanks for agreeing.”
I: “It all happened
when I was in tenth class. I still remember it was month of December.”
“Oh! Tenth.”
I, “Yeah! Please don’t
interrupt me sir.”
He, “Yeah!”
“One Sunday evening
when I opened my laptop to chat with my friend in Facebook, I found request
from an unknown girl. But I accepted to enquire whether she knows me or not.
When she came online she said, “Hi!”
I: “Hi! May I know who
are you? And do you know me?”
She: “My name is Kate
William as on my profile and I don’t know you?”
I: “Then, why did you
request me?”
She: “I liked your
profile status. So I sent it. Is there any problem with me?”
I: “No! Not at all.”
Kate: “Then tell me who
you are?”
I: “I’m human being.”
Kate: “Oh! I thought
you are animal.”
I: “What? What a
ghastly girl!”
Kate: “Oii! What did
you say? Say it once again?”
“Nothing much, I said
you are a good girl madam.”
Kate: “Oii! Don’t try
to make fun of me and don’t call me madam.”
I: “Okay!”
He interrupted
impatiently, “Uff! Then actually when did you meet her face-to-face?”
I: “Wait! I will say.”
I: “Everyday in the
evening she used to come online to chat with me and every day we both used to
fight in chat like small kids. Days passed away without knowing. She understood
me and my attitude very well. Then one day abruptly she asked my number.”
He ecstatically asked,
“Oh! Is it? Then, did you give your number? Wait! Let me guess. I think you
didn’t give.
I: “Hmmm....... Nope!
Your guess is wrong sir actually I gave her number.”
He**: “Then what
happened next?”
I: “What will happen,
as usual she gave me miss call. These girls will never change, they are very
selfish. And as every boy does I called her. She responded to my call.
She: “Hello! How are
you darling?”
I: “What darling? I’m
not your loved one. I’m just a friend.” Then she angrily cuts the call.
He**: “Why did you say
like that?”
I: “In order to know
what was in her mind and heart.”
He**: “Oh! Then?”
I: “Nothing much, I was
busy
Few days and I didn’t
respond to her called. Then one day I got message from her.”
He**: “What was that
message about?”
I: “She said in the
message that she can’t stay without talking to me. She also asked why I’m not
responding to her message.”
He**: “Oh! So sweet of
her and what’s your reply?
I: “I’m bit busy.”
He**: “Did you???”
I: “Hey! Let me ask one
thing. Can I know who are you and why are you so anxious and ecstatic to listen
about my love story?”
He**: “Sorry, Let’s
finish your story, and then I will tell who I am.”
I addled and continued
my story...
I: “On the next Sunday
I met her for the first time. She was waiting for me on her bike. I went near
her, by seeing me her face turned into tickled pink. We both stared for few
minutes then she replied first by saying, “Hi! I want to say you one thing but
after listening it don’t get angry.”
I: “Okay!”
She: “Will you be my
boyfriend?”
By listening to her my
mind became blank and it got stuck for some seconds then I abruptly replied,
“What? Is it a joke?”
She: “I’m not very
serious about it, say me right now.”
I: “I need some time.”
She: “Okay bye! Take
your own time and call me.”
He**: “How is she? Why did
you say like that?
I: “She was very
gorgeous like Queen Victoria with her long black shiny hair open with cute face
and I said her in that way because I wanted to keep her waiting for my reply.”
He**: “Then, What
happened? When did you say?”
I: “After few days I
called her and said her Okay. Then she replied, “Then why don’t you come to my
house to meet mom. I said about you to mom and she is agog and my father also
wanted to meet you but as he is out of country in U.S, he couldn’t meet you, he
felt egregious for it.
He**: “Did you go?”
I: “Yeah! I visited her
house for lunch. It was two storied abode. She has separate bedroom for her. She
first took me to her room then to her mom who was very busy in preparing supper
for use. The supper was really very delicious. Then after supper we both spent
time together chit-chatting. I asked her, “Why don’t you come to home? I will
introduce you to mom.”
She ignored first but
then she agreed to come for my sake. Then afterwards I left to home.
He**: “What’s her mom’s
opinion on you?”
I: “When I called her
next time she said that her mom was very happy with me, her mom also said that
I abased and moreover her mom thinks that I’m affable and egghead.”
He**: “Oh! What’s
next?”
I: “Nothing, arrival of
my exams. I was busy in preparation of exams and at the same time she was also
busy in the same purpose. And two weeks later when I completed my exams I
called her. She said that she felt very delighted by talking to me.”
He**: “Then when you
invited her to your home?”
I: “Hey! Wait! I’m
going to say about it only. Why are you so eager?”
I invited her on one
very fine Sunday, she came to my house and she spent some time with me and
moment. Mom was very happy by seeing her behaviour and politeness. Then....
He**: “Then what
happened? Why did you stop again?”
I couldn’t reply to
him. Again I felt every sad, and then finally I said that, “One fine day when
she was travelling in car, she phoned me and when I was talking to her all of
sudden she asked me, “If I die in accident what will you do?”
When I’m saying it to
him my eyes filled with tears. With anxiety he asked, “What did you say to my
daughter at that time?”
I: “I said that I will
kill her if she will say it again and I also said that I love her very much but
all of sudden I heard boom and her scream sound then her phone got cut. I tried
many times but her phone was dead. Then after few days when I phoned her friend
she said, “Kate is no more to us, she left us forever. She met with an accident
while travelling in car and unfortunately she was only person to die and
moreover her father is in serious condition fighting against death.”
I: “ After listening
that bad news I didn’t sleep and I
didn’t eat food for many days.”
Suddenly when I’m saying it to him my mind got
flashed that he said something like my daughter.
When I saw his face,
his face was full of sorrow and there were tears in his eyes. He hardly hugged
me and said, “I never thought that you missed her so much as I do. I’m father
of your lovely Kate. You are true lover.”
When he said it my mind
went all blank and I got stunned. He said that, “Before leaving her last breath
Kate asked her mom about you and said that she adores you very much and also
said that she doesn’t want to die.
By listening that I
came to know how much she loved me and I also came to know how painful it will
be when we lose someone nearer and dearer to us. So we should never become a
cause of other’s death because it pains very much when we will lose someone
dearer to us. And it is very hard to cure this pain and vain which I have
experienced personally.
The last thing I said
to that wise man, “For everyone she might be dead but for me she is always
alive in my dreams and heart.....”
MS.HRUDAY <3




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