Sunday, 21 October 2012

Itz true...

Itz true story 



It’s My Story
In grave yard lying down on my knees before the grave stone of a girl whom I adored. Tears were rolling out in silence. I kept flowers on her grave stone. My heart was very heavy with sorrow, and pain, with vain in my heart.
I spoke to the grave stone as if I am speaking to her “I miss you very much dear. Why did you leave me alone in this world of heartless people? Why didn’t you take me also to the heavens? Without you I’m like ancient mariner.”
“My dear child!” a soft voice interrupted me. I turned back, wiping my tears. I saw a white bearded tall man with a gentle look standing there in his black suit spoke, “Don’t stop let them flow.”
Listening him, I burst out drenching my shirt. I couldn’t stop; it took some time to for me to become normal.
“Who is she?”
“Her name is Kate William and she is and will be my loved forever.”
With abrupt and elate expression on his face he, “What? What did you say right now? Is she your love?”Then his face colour changed into elegiac, “I’m sorry for that. What happened to her? How did she get expired? I didn’t respond.
He repeated, “How did you meet her? Where did you both meet for the first time? I am very keen to listen to love stories. Can you please say yours?” I felt that it was very abhorrent because I’m despondent one-side and he wants me to narrate my love story. Uff! What a crazy man! Seems like a crazy monkey. First I got acrimonious, but I said, “Okay! I will say you but before it can we sit there.”
“Okay! As you wish and thanks for agreeing.”
I: “It all happened when I was in tenth class. I still remember it was month of December.”
“Oh! Tenth.”
I, “Yeah! Please don’t interrupt me sir.”
He, “Yeah!”
“One Sunday evening when I opened my laptop to chat with my friend in Facebook, I found request from an unknown girl. But I accepted to enquire whether she knows me or not. When she came online she said, “Hi!”
I: “Hi! May I know who are you? And do you know me?”
She: “My name is Kate William as on my profile and I don’t know you?”
I: “Then, why did you request me?”
She: “I liked your profile status. So I sent it. Is there any problem with me?”
I: “No! Not at all.”
Kate: “Then tell me who you are?”
I: “I’m human being.”
Kate: “Oh! I thought you are animal.”
I: “What? What a ghastly girl!”
Kate: “Oii! What did you say? Say it once again?”
“Nothing much, I said you are a good girl madam.”
Kate: “Oii! Don’t try to make fun of me and don’t call me madam.”
I: “Okay!”
He interrupted impatiently, “Uff! Then actually when did you meet her face-to-face?”
I: “Wait! I will say.”
I: “Everyday in the evening she used to come online to chat with me and every day we both used to fight in chat like small kids. Days passed away without knowing. She understood me and my attitude very well. Then one day abruptly she asked my number.”
He ecstatically asked, “Oh! Is it? Then, did you give your number? Wait! Let me guess. I think you didn’t give.
I: “Hmmm....... Nope! Your guess is wrong sir actually I gave her number.”
He**: “Then what happened next?”
I: “What will happen, as usual she gave me miss call. These girls will never change, they are very selfish. And as every boy does I called her. She responded to my call.
She: “Hello! How are you darling?”
I: “What darling? I’m not your loved one. I’m just a friend.” Then she angrily cuts the call.
He**: “Why did you say like that?”
I: “In order to know what was in her mind and heart.”
He**: “Oh! Then?”
I: “Nothing much, I was busy
Few days and I didn’t respond to her called. Then one day I got message from her.”
He**: “What was that message about?”
I: “She said in the message that she can’t stay without talking to me. She also asked why I’m not responding to her message.”
He**: “Oh! So sweet of her and what’s your reply?
I: “I’m bit busy.”
And I also dared to ask her whether I could meet her near church and she agreed.
He**: “Did you???”
I: “Hey! Let me ask one thing. Can I know who are you and why are you so anxious and ecstatic to listen about my love story?”
He**: “Sorry, Let’s finish your story, and then I will tell who I am.”
I addled and continued my story...
I: “On the next Sunday I met her for the first time. She was waiting for me on her bike. I went near her, by seeing me her face turned into tickled pink. We both stared for few minutes then she replied first by saying, “Hi! I want to say you one thing but after listening it don’t get angry.”
I: “Okay!”
She: “Will you be my boyfriend?”
By listening to her my mind became blank and it got stuck for some seconds then I abruptly replied, “What? Is it a joke?”
She: “I’m not very serious about it, say me right now.”
I: “I need some time.”
She: “Okay bye! Take your own time and call me.”
He**: “How is she? Why did you say like that?
I: “She was very gorgeous like Queen Victoria with her long black shiny hair open with cute face and I said her in that way because I wanted to keep her waiting for my reply.”
He**: “Then, What happened? When did you say?”
I: “After few days I called her and said her Okay. Then she replied, “Then why don’t you come to my house to meet mom. I said about you to mom and she is agog and my father also wanted to meet you but as he is out of country in U.S, he couldn’t meet you, he felt egregious for it.
He**: “Did you go?”
I: “Yeah! I visited her house for lunch. It was two storied abode. She has separate bedroom for her. She first took me to her room then to her mom who was very busy in preparing supper for use. The supper was really very delicious. Then after supper we both spent time together chit-chatting. I asked her, “Why don’t you come to home? I will introduce you to mom.”
She ignored first but then she agreed to come for my sake. Then afterwards I left to home.
He**: “What’s her mom’s opinion on you?”
I: “When I called her next time she said that her mom was very happy with me, her mom also said that I abased and moreover her mom thinks that I’m affable and egghead.”
He**: “Oh! What’s next?”
I: “Nothing, arrival of my exams. I was busy in preparation of exams and at the same time she was also busy in the same purpose. And two weeks later when I completed my exams I called her. She said that she felt very delighted by talking to me.”
He**: “Then when you invited her to your home?”
I: “Hey! Wait! I’m going to say about it only. Why are you so eager?”
I invited her on one very fine Sunday, she came to my house and she spent some time with me and moment. Mom was very happy by seeing her behaviour and politeness. Then....
He**: “Then what happened? Why did you stop again?”
I couldn’t reply to him. Again I felt every sad, and then finally I said that, “One fine day when she was travelling in car, she phoned me and when I was talking to her all of sudden she asked me, “If I die in accident what will you do?”
When I’m saying it to him my eyes filled with tears. With anxiety he asked, “What did you say to my daughter at that time?”
I: “I said that I will kill her if she will say it again and I also said that I love her very much but all of sudden I heard boom and her scream sound then her phone got cut. I tried many times but her phone was dead. Then after few days when I phoned her friend she said, “Kate is no more to us, she left us forever. She met with an accident while travelling in car and unfortunately she was only person to die and moreover her father is in serious condition fighting against death.”
I: “ After listening that bad news I didn’t  sleep and I didn’t eat food for many days.”
 Suddenly when I’m saying it to him my mind got flashed that he said something like my daughter.
When I saw his face, his face was full of sorrow and there were tears in his eyes. He hardly hugged me and said, “I never thought that you missed her so much as I do. I’m father of your lovely Kate. You are true lover.”
When he said it my mind went all blank and I got stunned. He said that, “Before leaving her last breath Kate asked her mom about you and said that she adores you very much and also said that she doesn’t want to die.
By listening that I came to know how much she loved me and I also came to know how painful it will be when we lose someone nearer and dearer to us. So we should never become a cause of other’s death because it pains very much when we will lose someone dearer to us. And it is very hard to cure this pain and vain which I have experienced personally.
The last thing I said to that wise man, “For everyone she might be dead but for me she is always alive in my dreams and heart.....”
                                           A real story by
                              MS.HRUDAY <3
                                           

37 comments:

  1. SUPERB article
    KEEEPPPP posting !!!

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  2. Really nice story first it was like just an old story but when i began reading it i really felt the story through my heart really heart touching one and
    all of last is this real story??

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  3. nice article.......really heart touching story........well done hruday.............

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  4. bro i can't comment about this article

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  5. nice story
    heart touching story

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  6. Its a GoOd StoRy Bt its Like tAking a PersOn To thE LeaP Of FaIth Of a MounTain and Pushing him Frm There.......bt dnt misunderstand me Ms.Hruday.Its a great story....bt dnt gve a mild heartattacks to the listeners....

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  7. nice story man one day u will become a famous author

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  8. sure hruday bro wil bcom author...
    nice.. good...

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  9. hruday

    na hrudayani baddalu kottinav poo

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  10. thks guys for ur encouragement i will bring some more gud stories once more thnks for ur support. :)

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  11. A medium length story, which revolves around on how a boy lost his first love. But what lacks, in the story is the pain the boy suffers isn't adequate and does not connect to your heart at very first moment. And the conversation between the characters go in a fast rate then the normal way in these days.Some part of the story is unfinished as the old man didn't reveal his identity. And about the message its good but it isn't adequate. Totally its a good story

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    1. hey thnks very much dude hey about the know man is mentioned at the last. once again thnks for ur valuable comment. i promise u tht u will see perfection in every field in my next story. :)

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  12. god made some good n bad...

    good:-
    1. created Mark Zuckerberg for facebook.
    2. make love between them.

    bad:-
    1. accident.
    2. tears....

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  13. oo ohh haha great compliment yar

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    1. ur story was too good ..really hruday it made my day ..

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  14. hmm..good one...bt cannot believe that its a true one..coz..kate william is a name in the books of ours..bt a heart touching luv story

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  15. so good and emotional i almost cried

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  16. hruday its rely great heart touching story loved it a lot you may become an author a day i am craze really so great ra

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  17. kanna, remember three statements of Charlie Chaplin.
    1.Nothing is permanent in this world.So r the Sorrows.
    2.The day is wasted if u do not laugh on that day.
    3.I like TO WALK IN THE RAIN BECAUSE NO ONE CAN SEE MY TEARS.

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  18. nice stories superbbbb... really heart touching....

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  19. great!
    keep it up dude...!!!

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  20. hey nyc mate...........!!{}!!!

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  21. The culmination of the story was quite exceptional what I found after reading it.The narration has been quite good and it was really touching to me.Well done bro!!!
    Looking forward to hear many more from you :)

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  22. hey Saiboy this is one of your masterpiece, the situation was dealt properly, your quite good at writing conversational style,this story reflects it.
    I have enjoyed it, just put on some more felling in it even i will burst out of tears.

    keep put effort you will become a nice author

    "you will never know know what is happiness when there is no pain"

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  23. the one who really feel his heart can build up such a amazng one....aakinyanchu anju rudh de!!!!

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  24. LET HER SOUL MAY REST IN PEACE.........

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  25. heart touching storryyy

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  26. goodstory,want to see more from you
    but still if there was no accident in the story it may be awesome

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